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Thread: i need feedback

  1. #1
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    i need feedback

    i drawing the character.
    but, personally this is not perfect.
    i just want semi realistic character. but it is not as good as my expectation.
    can you critique this picture, what is wrong?
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    p.s. i want delete my first miss upload thread. could you help me?
    Last edited by zaku; 05-23-2014 at 03:37 AM.

  2. #2
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    Pero ...esta pintura, así tal cual, me gusta mucho!!!

    But ... this painting, just like that, I really like!
    Regards from Chile
    "El arte no reproduce lo visible. Lo hace visible" Paul Klee

  3. #3
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    I do not think anything is wrong, perhaps additional layers:to really bring out contrast of tones and build up detail-great start though!

  4. #4
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    I really like it

    I think you need to experiment a bit with highlights and shadows. You'll get a lot more depth that way.
    Try looking in the mirror, to get a general feeling of where the shadows hit depending on the lightsource. Personally I find that this helps

    Other than that, just practice, practise, practise. With every painting you make, you'll find out new stuff.

  5. #5
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    The thing I notice is that the eye proportions are a little off they are a bit too large say compared to other features like the nose.
    Geoff

  6. #6
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    Hi Zaku,
    Is this your first attempt? If yes then you did a great job and if no then keep on practicing as practice make a man perfect! Focus on shading and texture most, it will improve your work. Keep practicing and keep sharing.

  7. #7
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    Its coming along nice. The realism comes with shadows. It looks like a nice base point I think it needs darker shadows around the nose, lips and hair. Add more detail to the eyes too

  8. #8
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    Thumbs up

    for a more smoother look, go in canvas settings
    And you will see the Roughness, Grains etc.
    Changes the Roughness to 0%
    And what I also do to ensure that its smooth like , I add more fillers to my brush in the brush setting, so its not as chunky or messy.

    Brush Tool: change it to about it 50-75%

  9. #9

    head blends to much

    around the left Side of the head it blends in to much with the white background

  10. #10
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    I like it

    Nice work I like the cartoony look.

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