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Thread: Cup of Coffee

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    Cup of Coffee

    This painting looks like card board to me...I am not satisfied with it at all...C&C welcome as always
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    Try to see as many angles of vision as possible...no single one of us has a "handle" on the whole picture.

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    Hi Sem...........first let me apologise for taking the liberty of changing your painting...........I find it hard to critique but easier to show what I want to say..........I used the soft knife to smooth and left some as you had it.........I think a cup should be smooth........but I'm no expert........please don't be offended.........I did it too quickly really but with more time it could be much better.
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    You definitely improved my painting...thanks for the advice Peter...
    Try to see as many angles of vision as possible...no single one of us has a "handle" on the whole picture.

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    Steve, I think it looks very good. Certainly far better than I could do.
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    Sem, great shape and colours to your cup and saucer but smoother is better

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    The shape of cup is realistic, just the coffee looks not so "liquid" but I can't tell you how to do it.

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    I love this painting ... also because that's what we call a cup of coffee and most foreign people an expresso and reserve the name in Your title to a mug of coffee tinted hot water!
    Last edited by Caesar; 11-24-2010 at 03:27 AM.
    Panta rei (everything flows)!

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    Thanks to all who commented and gave advice...I really enjoy being part of this helpful artistic community where we can truly learn from each other...
    Try to see as many angles of vision as possible...no single one of us has a "handle" on the whole picture.

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