A friend of mine created a vampire composition for a contest he is entering, so naturally, I decided to create my own vampire composition and asked him what he thought it needed. Alas he being my greatest fan (though for writing rather than art) just said "Wow, it's great!"
So I'm seeking an unbias view. I'm sure it's not finished. There's also a bit of a story to it and I want to see if I got it across a little.
Thank you in advance!