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    Need some crits on 'Early Morning'

    I would appreciate some tips on how to fix the water. Like in the other post, I origianally had calm and reflective water, but decided I wanted a the water to be choppy a little bit. Just doesn't look right now. Also need help with the grass and showing how deep/tall it is. Kudos to those who know what breed of equine this is
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    im no expert on water, but i think you have done a good job on it, with the grass i would maybe put some darker highlights in, from the back to front and possibly some more background detail like some hedges or a fence but otherwise its a very good painting.

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    Is it "pony" breed?

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    Thank you for taking a peek Darkstrokes. I'll try adding in a fence, the picture does seem a bit plain.

    The breed is Norwegian Fjord, rerrett Considered more of a draft or cob breed i think, anyways it is my favorite type of horse
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