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Thread: Portrait of a young girl.

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    Portrait of a young girl.

    Is just a very simple exercice and I didn't have a model,sometimes is better, sometimes is worst.
    I show to you two studies, is that too colorful for you ? :?:
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    "All are about quiet and light." Dany
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    The first one has more contrast (highlight) than the second one. The second one is more colorful. Am I right? :roll:

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    Hi Pai,

    In fact I put them in the wrong order , the one with the text on it is the last one, stil not finished yet;
    there are more contrast but also more color for the shadow but I am not very glad about it, is just an exercice. ops:
    "All are about quiet and light." Dany
    Daily Studio Notes , Daniela Ionesco-Fine Art

    I accept critics only from friends,
    how about You ?

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    I'm glad you said they were in the wrong order because the second one looks more distorted than the first. I can't really think of any suggestions to improve right now apart from possibly filling in the background a bit more? It's just that in my opinion the background looks very bare in comparison with the rest of the image.

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    Yes, the background is monochrome but this is just an exercise.
    "All are about quiet and light." Dany
    Daily Studio Notes , Daniela Ionesco-Fine Art

    I accept critics only from friends,
    how about You ?

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