This is a quite intriguing style, certainly not for comics, too realistic/ 3D and complex for high rates productions (apart from the hair), unless You simplify it a bit, but it looks quite interesting, like a sort of realistic-japanese manga fusion.
I can only observe that proportions, though somehow distorted by a style, should be always harmonic and within certain proportional rules. I find the hands too small, for instance, IMO and of different sizes, even considering the perspective.
Moreover a better merging with the background, both in terms of style of the latter and, above all, no neat border as if the figure were a sticker, would further enhance this powerful illustration, I find.
Go on and test, You're about to fix Your wonderful style!
Panta rei (everything flows)!