pic: the sky over the city #252

[Mike Severoff]

the sky over the city #252
(St.Petersburg,ru)

[eighty+]

Hi MIKE good to see U I see your still up in the Cold not the place for brass Monkeys yes Like your painting lots of detail and a fine job U made of the

Clouds which I always try to Dodge if I can ok Mike CIAO HASTA LA VISTA IVAYA CON DIOS ...SLAINTE ......POZDRAWSKI makes me think I'm speaking Polish

[Mike Severoff]

Hi MIKE good to see U I see your still up in the Cold not the place for brass Monkeys..

Hi, eighty!
Glad to hear you, man!
The work went not. I'm not happy with it.
I want to learn write large strokes

[gxhpainter2]

Hello again Mike, nice to see you back with a new post!, I like the bright sky and colors !...

[Mike Severoff]

I like the bright sky and colors !...

Oh, hi, gxh! Thanks for the feedback

[BushcraftOnFire]

Nice job Mike. This is a wonderful rendering that grabbed my eyes and kept them on the painting looking for more and more!

[D Akey]

Very nice. If you aren't happy with it, consider making your composition more dynamic perhaps. It also looks like you stopped when you got to the water at the bottom of the painting.

If your intention for the painting is to show the sky, give that importance. If it's the buildings, show that part with more focus. If the river, feature that as the main part of the painting. It could make it easier for you to build your painting around a specific theme.

If you want to paint using big paint strokes, then perhaps try doing simpler paintings without so much detail. And once you get comfortable, you can take it to later paintings.

But this is pretty nice. Good job!

[Caesar]

Fine urban sketch with all these powerful incumbent sky and clouds!

[Mike Severoff]

If you want to paint using big paint strokes, then perhaps try doing simpler paintings without so much detail. And once you get comfortable, you can take it to later paintings.

Spasibo, dr. Akey