I recommend that you set it aside and then look at it after at least a week with a fresh eye. The issues will become apparent to you.

What I see is that you are getting into other areas of the painting experience that come with having done a lot of it. The main one is that your mind is starting to get cluttered. When I backslide this much it usually means I am too tired and I'm not thinking clearly.

So my recommendation is to step back a bit.