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Thread: Freshwater Angels: Advice? Ideas for improvement? Constructive criticism?

  1. #1
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    Freshwater Angels: Advice? Ideas for improvement? Constructive criticism?

    Hi all,

    I need some advice, critique, ideas.

    I'm in a situation at the moment where I'm not able to work at a 'conventional' job so I'm taking a stab at offering my work to the public.

    I'm looking for critique in all the obvious areas, ways to improve the painting, technique, etc. I am also looking for whether an idea I had seems to work or not.

    One of the factors taken into consideration when buying a painting is how it will go with existing decor. So I thought of using Pantone decorator's colors as the basis for my color palette. This example uses 2015 Pantone colors.

    Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.

    Thanks so much in advance!
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    I'm an artist. I draw flies . . .

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    I've just written on your other post, and think they are gorgeous. Critique? Maybe the grey background is too dependent on the brush's abilities and a bit 'blobby'? Perhaps you could find a way to break the edges up and make a more pleasing border?

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    Sounds like a good idea. I'm still figuring out what I can do with the watercolor brushes. I'll play with it some. Thanks!
    I'm an artist. I draw flies . . .

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