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i need feedback
i drawing the character.
but, personally this is not perfect.
i just want semi realistic character. but it is not as good as my expectation.
can you critique this picture, what is wrong?
p.s. i want delete my first miss upload thread. could you help me?
Last edited by zaku; 05-23-2014 at 04:37 AM.
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Pero ...esta pintura, así tal cual, me gusta mucho!!!
But ... this painting, just like that, I really like!
Regards from Chile
"El arte no reproduce lo visible. Lo hace visible" Paul Klee
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I do not think anything is wrong, perhaps additional layers:to really bring out contrast of tones and build up detail-great start though!
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I really like it
I think you need to experiment a bit with highlights and shadows. You'll get a lot more depth that way.
Try looking in the mirror, to get a general feeling of where the shadows hit depending on the lightsource. Personally I find that this helps
Other than that, just practice, practise, practise. With every painting you make, you'll find out new stuff.
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The thing I notice is that the eye proportions are a little off they are a bit too large say compared to other features like the nose.
Geoff
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Hi Zaku,
Is this your first attempt? If yes then you did a great job and if no then keep on practicing as practice make a man perfect! Focus on shading and texture most, it will improve your work. Keep practicing and keep sharing.
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head blends to much
around the left Side of the head it blends in to much with the white background
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I like it
Nice work I like the cartoony look.
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