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  1. #11
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    Smashing only one thought. The spray or foam oo the 2ndrock takes away the impact of the 1st

    But take no notice as I havn't. a. Clue . . SLAINTE

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    Thanks D!
    I was trying to aggressively pull the view to that by making it glow more.
    Hoped it would balance the other darker heavier areas.

    Quote Originally Posted by D Akey View Post
    Got that lighting 'just so'. . . Nice luminosity in the focal point.

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    Thanks for the critique eighty+!

    It is a good thought and feedback. I had hoped the brightness of the focal point would outweigh the other elements enough to get the viewer to move around and then come back to the glow. But, I really see what you're talking about.

    -Brett

    Quote Originally Posted by eighty+ View Post
    Smashing only one thought. The spray or foam oo the 2ndrock takes away the impact of the 1st

    But take no notice as I havn't. a. Clue . . SLAINTE

  4. #14
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    Nicely done! I visited your gallery and enjoyed viewing your paintings...
    'Moonlit Ocean', killer painting! Don't have any thoughts or constructive criticism to give,
    other then its good work, and looking forward for more...
    Steve

  5. I'm just going to join the crowd and compliment you on the scattered light through the wave. Lovely.

    If I have to offer critique, it would be that the rocks do not feel as solid as the wave due to the rougher style. They don't detract much, but as the eye wanders the slight drop in quality is apparent (though this may be intentional to draw focus to the, urm, focus). Still gorgeous though.

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    Great spot on lighting for an effective painting indeed! The luminous ray through a big, greeny wave fascinated to me since ever.
    Panta rei (everything flows)!

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    Beautiful work on that wave, well done
    Sometimes...I remember better with my eyes closed

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