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    Still life with apples

    Its my new still life composition in progress. Please some critique and sugestion. Thanks for watch

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    This is terrific! Look forward to see the finished product.

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    Well your fruit looks so real, if I could make one small comment in that the profile of the rim of the glass looks to be slightly in the wrong plane in relationship to the bowl rim given the same viewpoint .
    Look forward to seeing the finished work
    Geoff
    Last edited by limey-g; 04-01-2013 at 09:00 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by limey-g View Post
    Well your fruit looks so real, if I could make one small comment in that the profile of the rim of the glass looks to be slightly in the wrong plane in relationship to the bowl rim given the same viewpoint .
    Look forward to seeing the finished work
    Geoff
    Thanks for comment. Of course it is bad profile glass, good notice.

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    This is step by step my work.

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    i find your fruits are really nice but I prefer the first version of the bottle - may be it's only a question of colour, I am not good enough to give you a more accurate advice. Anyway I like this painting of yours.

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    Quote Originally Posted by copespeak View Post
    This is terrific! Look forward to see the finished product.
    Thank You. I hope finish it tomorrow.

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