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Thread: constructive criticism wanted

  1. #1
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    constructive criticism wanted

    constructive criticism wanted
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  2. #2
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    Howdy!

    Personally, I think the spots on the hills are pretty contrasty. They sort of visually break apart in the context of the painting.

    Think hierarchy of shapes so that there is a relationship between the major masses and you can break them up within those big areas -- to where each sot relates to its overall grouping.

    It's a good idea. I like your direction and stylization.

    Keep going!


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    i agree with d akey, maybe make the shadows on the hills more subtle? i like the trees though.

  4. #4
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    Personally, I like this painting. The spots are bold. I noticed the trees to the right, right away.

  5. #5
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    You have a beautiful style developing in the tradition of the great Hispanic muralists. Please keep it up and do more of them.

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    Dear Mark......i like this very much, may be silly to say but each tree seems to have its own personality, i like the one in the right side of the gully, just a little tipsy, would like to know what is in the bottom of that gully though, mayby best left unknown,,,,,,,,,,,,,

  7. #7
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    Overall I like this very muc. It is bold and dramatic. Something subtle bothers me -not sure if it is the spots or the green color? Still I find I like the style and the color with minor points very very much.

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