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    Sedona

    Please tell me what you think.I feel it's missing something.
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    +A quite lonely place, almost a faraway planet if it were not for the big moon taking us back here, since it's certainly terrificly unlikely that a planet of the size of the earth has such a big close satellite ...
    Since You have that feeling I tend to share, I see a well done, moody scenario with little variety and no main focal point though, thus You should perhaps add a subject or a centre of interest I think. An ET, a spaceship, a sandworm, a cowboy ... whatever Your fantasy may think of.
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    I agree with Cesare, it just needs that little something for the eye to focus on. Oh boy it looks such a lonely place but well painted
    Sometimes...I remember better with my eyes closed

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    Thanks

    Thanks for all the great comments. I will work on this one.
    Thanks for the welcome.

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