I like the groom's eyes much better now, Mr Ploos.
Not a problem in either case, but I'm curious about the bride's veil on top of her head. Is there a reason for a preference either way or did it just happen when you were painting? I mean one has more white showing and it's framing the head somewhat. Both are fine. One frames her more and with such an active background it might serve the pic to have it fuller as the one has rather than peeking in and out. But it's a minor thing.
Also I like the whites of the bride's eyes in the second one better and her teeth in the second one as well. It's a little punchy in the first one (of the two just above). So number 2 suits me better.
Fine work, laddie! Way to stick with it going for perfection. Good learning too, no doubt.
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