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Thread: Bus sketch'es 1.2.3.4.5.

  1. #4901
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    Quote Originally Posted by eighty+ View Post
    Hi Mac done as you said cleared the White from her upper lip ok see what you think now
    Much better, I think, Mr Ploos. What do you think? A rule of thumb, and one of the reason's it's nice to get a fresh eye, is that certain stuff pops out as odd that is in the source photo or model to the viewer that the artist may not consider so distracting. And what you had before on the lip was one of those things. Don't get me wrong, sometimes peculiarities add character, so much so that the artist names the picture after a detail that stands out.

    But in this case I like the pic a lot more because it gives us a clear look at the little one, in an area of the painting with a lot of detail happening. . . which makes sense and looks great by the way. I also really like the effort you put into the pattern on the cup, and the perspective on it is really nice.

    So the pic is nicely balanced with the emphasis both on the mom, because she's large and placed in generally the first place we see (considering western readers are used to entering a page from the upper left), and then there's the baby with all the stuff around the hand area. Seems nicely balanced visually and charming in subject.

    Well done, lad.
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    Thanks mac. I like your break down. . Wonder what Mum will think???

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    Hi is it monday if it is what happened to Sunday
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    hi yeah it is Monday I did get must have clicked the wrong place as Ayasha popped up didn't have the heart to tell her it was monday

    so gave her a quick wash and hose down ok SLAINTE
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    Very nicely done eighty, you seem to have a knack for indian maidens.
    Geoff

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    Hi there dear Eighty, suns out and been out in the garden again. You have been such a busy lad and love the little girl. Well done dear friend
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    Hello Dame Katie of the Moara ' the garden YUk that reminds me looks like two days pruneing and rubbish clearing think I'll plead insanity

    Hi as you are a Cheshire Lad is ok to call you Geoffray I think I'm better with the Iron Maiden at least she doesn't let you answer back

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    HI a quick slash with the Knife
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    Hi got on the bus there was a look of terror as they thought I'd snuffed it ok BUS Sketches 1st of 5
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    hi 2nd of 5 last 1 tried with the IPad dodgy thou not enough time on the bus have to stick to the pencil and sketchpad

    SLAINTE .........STATTE BBONNE........Si...........Si .........KuAU LE SHENTI JAINKANG ZIA JAIN
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