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Thread: Two girls

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    Two girls

    Hello friends.
    After a period of hard work have rewarded me with a day off and I wanted to take the opportunity here to draw these two girls who are daughters of some great friends. Personally I think you need more treatment on the skin, what do you think?
    Hope you like it.
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    Wonderful drawing Javier... I think it's great the way it is.
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    Beautiful drawing Javier, and loving looking children

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    They are so cute!

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    Very pretty children made a pretty picture.

    I would put more shading in the eyes... and that's it. Very good work, Javier.

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    I wouldn't do much more than what AT-TA suggested. Only to bring out those adorable eyes. Excellent work.

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    This drawing is just fantastically on target.
    It's time to balance it tonally, I'd say.
    Now You should only darken some points on lip sides, on and about the eies and the around the nose and nostrils, I think .... some outline should be darker too, depending on light direction and what is behind. Dark against light behind and light against dark behind is the adjustment, golden rule, whenever possible and credible.
    Last edited by Caesar; 10-26-2010 at 09:13 PM.
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    javier,
    A delightful portrait of two sweethearts. Well painted!
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    They both look delightful
    I would personally just add a little more shadow to bring out the eyes and a few other bits as have already been suggested
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