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Thread: Women's portrait

  1. #1
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    Cool Women's portrait

    This is my first portrait in crayon using Artrage.
    Just wondering if you have any suggestions for better job.
    Thanks all for your great job of assisting us new ones.
    tedb

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    Sorry

    I didn't get to attach my painting!
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  3. #3
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    Wow! This is exceptional.

  4. #4
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    womens portrait

    docsmith Thanks so much for you viewing my work. Learning all the time.

  5. #5
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    looking for a focal

    Nice painting. Overall this painting works nicely. I find myself wanting the eyes to be more expressive or detailed or a central point of focus.

    Comon wisdom is a painting has a central focus and then they rest of the composition supports and leads back to the central point of focus. So your eyes are the central focus but they are little weak in that role. Hope that helps. Look forward to updates.
    Thanks

  6. #6
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    portrait

    thanks Ranorwood for your suggestion on a focal point. Your right I could have made the eyes stand out more. I was more concerned on the face as a whole.

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