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Thread: Lover's Arms - Yet another poem.

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jun 2009

    Lover's Arms - Yet another poem.

    What can I say? I love writing.
    Lover's Arms

    We were together
    When we shouldíve been apart,
    But as everything falls around me,
    I realise youíve broken my heart.

    Now as I learn about her,
    Time seems to freeze,
    And not even your reassuring smile,
    Keeps me from falling to my knees.

    You said you loved me,
    But were you lying?
    I canít take this anymore,
    ĎCos Iím so sick of crying.

    I never really thought Iíd shed,
    A tear about you and I,
    But as our fate is sealed,
    I cannot help but cry.

    I trusted you with my heart,
    My mind, my soul,
    But now youíve left me,
    And nothing call fill this hole.

    When I told you to take my heart,
    I didnít mean to tear it out,
    And all this frustration and pain,
    Makes me want to scream and shout.

    I cannot tell you how much it hurts,
    It would be a waste of precious time,
    Because what you did to me,
    Was worse than any crime.

    I canít change what has happened,
    I can only mourn it,
    And I swear, no matter how much I cry,
    I swear it only hurt a bit.

    You donít have to worry,
    About me anymore,
    Because Iíll just ignore the pain,
    No matter how sore.

    So it can only be left to say,
    While on me it is not fair,
    Stay in your loverís arms,
    And may you find comfort there.

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    St. Louis, MO, USA
    Wow...Weeun....this is extremely heartfelt and well done. Like I said in your other post, you are wise and older beyond your years! Beautiful poem for sure!!!

  3. #3
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    I agree. It's a very heartfelt poem. In it, I share your pain. Not sure it ever gets easier. We just write our poems and move on. And yours is brilliant and speaks to the heart.

    Anyway, it's a matter of which way you're looking. This is what somebody else, Irving Berlin wrote, and at your age, get ready. You'll hear this plenty. It's your ride. Enjoy it. And keep your pen and tablet handy.

    Nice poem, weeun.
    "Not a bit is wasted and the best is yet to come. . ." -- remembered from a dream

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    You are brilliant. You should collect all of your poems an dtake them to a publisher and ask if he thinks you could make a book of them. You may be on the road to fame. I certainly would purchase a book of them.
    Love one another.-Jesus

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