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    A Victorian

    I just started doodling, and 10 minutes later I realized I had other things I needed to do, but that I wanted to come back to this.
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    Early to bed early to rise makes a man stupid and blind in the eyes - Orson Scott Card

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    Well, here's your wish... or 30% or so of it...
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    With most of the color laid down and lighting fiddled with. Of course, I know I'm missing some important things, some critiques would be great. Her left eye (the one on the right as we look at it) is a mess, but I have no idea how to fix it. It's not really indented at all like it should be, but I can't quite figure it out. Also, not so happy with the eyelashes.

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    Her eye seems right, maybe a little (very little) high? I think if you shave a bit off the side of her face the eye will look more natural. The ear though.. that is incredible. I can't even fake an ear

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    Quite a nice piece of work there.

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    Gray, you get better and better! I learned a lot from the art project thread on the eye. My favorites being Sketch and Cesare's eye. They are indeed very hard to do. The ear is challenging for me. Good work and I love the strokes. I was particularly impressed with Oriane's portrait.

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    I agree with Alexandra. Fantastic scketch and great colors Gray. Well done.

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    Haha! Thanks all for comments. I think I'm with squirls on this one: if you look at it just right, you can see a picaso moment in there. Sigh. Not what I was going for.
    Early to bed early to rise makes a man stupid and blind in the eyes - Orson Scott Card

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