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    one more time

    ok, im a artrage o holic.. i paint, and sketch all my spare time..
    ive been working on this a while now,, any tips on whats missing ?? i like the tree and the wolf,, does the moon look funny to anyone else ?

    ( pardon my english if its not perfect, im a bit rusty on it )

    does anyone else here do like i do,, i think i have 6 different projekts going on now,, maybe i should keep to one at a time...
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    the back ground is a bit flat mayb add a little bit of cloud in the sky.
    The drawing is wonderful by the way.

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    Looks good. I like it. Maybe the cloud would do it.

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    yeah,, a cloud ot two maybe,, and i was thinking of adding a tree or two,, shorter than the first one.
    Im really happy with how the wolf came out, much easier to draw with crayon than oil paint.

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    tried some changes

    i moved the moon, and added a tree...
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    Hi okasa,

    First, I'd like to say I really like this picture. Both the first and the version with your changes are well done.

    The only suggestion I have to offer is to add darker edges to the sky to show the glow of the moon. It may add some depth to the background.
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    Okasa, i would recommend going to the NASA Hubble space gallery, if you haven't already, and paint some of the classic marks of the moon on the moon.

    On the one hand i see you have a very detailed awesome looking wolf and yet you haven't followed the same detail with your moon, i'm not suggesting making the moon as detailed as the Wolf, but i really feel it's lacking those classic markings that make the moon the moon, if you know what i mean

    Great work some far, it's coming along nicely
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    I am very impressed Okasa, beautiful work!

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    Talking

    Quote Originally Posted by Silentman View Post
    Okasa, i would recommend going to the NASA Hubble space gallery, if you haven't already, and paint some of the classic marks of the moon on the moon.

    On the one hand i see you have a very detailed awesome looking wolf and yet you haven't followed the same detail with your moon, i'm not suggesting making the moon as detailed as the Wolf, but i really feel it's lacking those classic markings that make the moon the moon, if you know what i mean

    Great work some far, it's coming along nicely

    haha,, so true SS. Igot a bit lacy and simply used a stencil and crayon to make the moon,, will visit the site and upgrade the moon..

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    try, try and try again...

    i made a more "real" moon, and added a .. suppose you could call it halo in english ? i dont know if an can call it finished yet,, any hints ?
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