please some critics and tips
Last edited by Illuminati; 06-10-2009 at 06:09 PM.
My only comment so far would be that without indication of where the bridge of her nose is, her face looks a little flat. Otherwise it's coming along nicely. Keep working on it
hi Illuminati, thats a nice, neat attempt. im sure if u take little care this will look great.
as for crits, the gap between the eyes seems to be a bit too much, as from this angle. and perspective wise, the nose is not in line with the lips, the tip of the nose and the centre of the lips are not in line. having a curved line (a verticle line from strict front, dividing the face in 2 halves), suggesting a centre of the face, will help u get the idea. remember, from this perspective, that line wont be in the centre and drawn only for the idea of proportions and perspective, u can erase that later.
u can even give a suggestion of the bone, under the eyebrow, let it protrude. at the moment that outline goes straight to the top. this will help u define the shape for later stage.
all the best...
Last edited by waheednasir; 05-26-2009 at 04:24 PM.
Good work so far. a good thing to remember about the eyes is that the space between them is usually about the same size as one eye. Again, great job!
ok i updated the file take a look at it again plz^^
thx i updated it. care to give it a look?
Originally Posted by mojo1975
this part above eyes should be more faded, chin too
look at some tutorials about drawing a face, it should help you a little
but nice beginning
The right side of the face looks pretty good ( My right, not hers) But the left side is too round and pops out, look at profile and sub-profile pictures and you will see what I mean/
thx i'll look for a few
Originally Posted by emenemsbis
yeah i know. solving it right now
Originally Posted by Krondelo