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    two portraits...critique need

    hey all..Im aware about some anatomy mistakes in the first one..the hip bones hardness for example,and the line going through the abdominal area too..
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    wow - i really like the first one! I like the grey metallic style of it! awsome

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    i like them both, beautiful

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    These are great starts with artrage. You should be very happy. These are accomplished paintings and you obviously have experience with figure drawing. Nothing to critique here except to say they are very good. I like the style of the first one and not the least bit distracted by any textures that show up in the black and white. Love the effects and strokes. Embrace them.

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    Two well drawn figures, two different styles, both good.

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    cutepoison,
    These are marvelous. Especially the top gray one. You captured the essence of humanity in that one.

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    I feel u still need to study form and anatomy more.My suggestion is to try drawing simple objects being hit by a direct source of light.E.g a ball

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