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RJR
01-15-2008, 09:16 AM
Well i thought a seascape would be different, i like waves and breakers so i thought i give it a try and see how it would come out.
Any suggestions on improvement that you all may have would be mostly appreciated, i find making waves rather hard so i'm up for any ideas on that especially.

Thanks,
-Rich

barnburner
01-16-2008, 03:03 AM
Very well done. I like it.

My only suggestion would be that you might try and reduce the amount of white in the waves - but that's just a guess on my part, and I could be wrong. :)

splotch
01-16-2008, 05:23 AM
Hello,
Very nice RJR, great texture and colour in your painting. My only thought would be to maybe reduce some of the texture /detail in the light house which would create some depth from the foreground detail. You could play it in more of a silhouette with a bit more light from the beacon.

A lot of words for such a minor point, a really nice job.

RJR
01-16-2008, 05:31 AM
thanks for the suggestions, i'm going to mess with it some this week and see if i can get some more depth in the background and tweak the water somewhat.

thank goodness for layers.

thanks. :D

screenpainter
01-16-2008, 08:18 AM
That is quite a beautiful painting. Looks finished to me. Great job. :D

D Akey
01-16-2008, 08:52 AM
Nice and agitated.

There's need for a lighthouse in such weather. Must be tough to navigate.

:D :D :D

RJR
01-16-2008, 01:44 PM
thank you. :D