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Jose_Diogo
07-27-2007, 06:36 AM
Hello, it has already some time!
I bring for your appreciation two works, both executed in “Artrage” v. 2.0.
The first one of them was executed without a reference photo, but basing me in the memory of a place where already it stows and some imagination.
The second one, it was inhaled in a photo that I shoot with my webcam of a light bulb next to my face, in order to get this effect of dramatical light, finding I that is obvious the necessity of blur the outline of the figure with the background, waiting therefore other critiques and suggestions from all you.
Thank you.

ENCHANTER
07-27-2007, 09:06 AM
THESE ARE WONDERFUL!!!

:D

D Akey
07-27-2007, 09:23 AM
Juicy painting style.

I think they're incredible. Each one has one thing that I want to mention.

On the landscape, It's beautiful color and I like the strokes. The foreground ridge to the left might be a bit darker if you're interested in showing depth.

Inside the crying guy's mouth, at the back of the throat, the light dot looks like a light dot rather than a part of the throat. I would make any highlight subtler -- perhaps make the surrounding area a little darker than the tonsil so it will stand out but not jump out. You used the same paint color as the teeth, so it's a little confusing.

Other than that they are brilliant.

pai
07-27-2007, 05:18 PM
Very nice paintings. Hope to see more.