View Full Version : Composition Re-work of Apple Painting

01-26-2019, 04:14 AM
Looking for some feedback about the process and results of my composition based re-work.

Original Thread: https://forums.artrage.com/showthread.php?54103-Apple-Still-life-Composition-Based-Rework/page2

Original Version

Final Version

Jack Forge
01-30-2019, 01:13 PM
The final version is significantly improved. The opening between the two cylindrical objects is not distracting as it is in the original version. The angle of the table now better suits the composition and the right edge nicely repeats the upper edge of the apple shadow. That shadow might have been more interesting with more textural detail. All in all though a lovely realistic still life. Fine work.

01-30-2019, 04:58 PM
Thank you for the feedback and the kind words!

Stephen Lo Piano
04-24-2019, 12:57 PM
This painting is incredible, so realistic looking. You mastered the technique of light against dark to bring out a realistic look in the apple.

04-24-2019, 01:07 PM
Thank you Stephen!

05-22-2019, 04:11 AM
very realistic, congrats.