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eblawrence84
07-19-2018, 02:48 PM
Hi everyone,

I'm Ted and am a newbie artist. I joined this forum to get constructive feedback on the work I post :) Look forward to hearing from all of you!


Ted

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isabel.a
07-19-2018, 07:07 PM
A mi me gusta, lo haz valorizado muy bien, buenos contrastes. Solo te objeto el espacio en blanco inferior, yo hubiera centrado el dibujo, dandole "blanco" arriba y abajo

sabena
07-20-2018, 02:00 AM
Fascinating work Isabela i like very much .:)

eblawrence84
07-20-2018, 02:24 AM
gracias por el consejo ☺️ ¿Qué significa centrarlo? Trataré de blanquearlo también para textura / luz y sombra

pat1940
07-20-2018, 06:18 AM
Ted, this is a great drawing hope to see more of your work, welcome to the forum

D Akey
07-24-2018, 06:20 AM
Hey there. Nice work! Welcome to the forums.

I've no particular comment on this one, other than I think the apple is quite nicely done.

Pretty darn cool for a newbie.

eblawrence84
07-25-2018, 02:00 AM
Thanks Pat :-)

eblawrence84
07-25-2018, 02:01 AM
Thanks!!! :)

WebRage
07-25-2018, 12:36 PM
Hey Ted,

Welcome to using ArtRage, hope you are enjoying it.

An apple is actually a great way to start off, as there's so many different techniques to use and try. I really like your texture/grain of the apple, looks good.

Keep exploring and don't be afraid to save some copies to try new things! I would love to see it with a splash of colour. Practice with the airbrush, watercolours, or crayons/pencil drawing the same apple perhaps? Have fun!

Suggested tutorial:
https://forums.artrage.com/files/apple-by-henry-stahle.pdf

All the best,

Mike

eighty+
07-25-2018, 11:10 PM
:D Hi Ted welcome like what I see ok I'm also a OLD OLD OLD Newbie ( Artist ??? ) Plooder :) CIAO SLAINTE