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07-10-2018, 02:24 AM
Hello, one illustration more of what i writted 30 years ago !!! i was 21 years old when i did write a long text of 130 pages

D Akey
07-10-2018, 02:48 AM
Intriguing specter. Looks like a friendly spirit with enchanted tongs. Fun!

07-10-2018, 04:23 AM
yes ! you found it ! tongs are special, there are tangible in 2 world, the spirit world and the material world. It makes junction beetwen the 2 world.

07-10-2018, 06:53 AM
Qué increíble! Jamás había apreciado algo similar!!! Me ha gustado mucho!

07-10-2018, 07:18 AM
Thank you Damasod ! Very happy that you appréciate !

07-15-2018, 02:46 AM
here is a version 2 : the wall is more red
could would tell me whitch one you chose ? Thank you

D Akey
07-15-2018, 08:42 AM
here is a version 2 : the wall is more red
could would tell me whitch one you chose ? Thank you

Number 2 is my preference because the orange is not so bright. It's almost never a good idea to have the background be too eye catching unless it's what you want people to look at. But in this case, seemingly you want people to see your character as well as the rainbow tongs. With the less vibrant red of the walls, it's overall a better stage for your story. It's still a dazzling enough color to maintain the high key feel of your overall look to the comic.

Anyway, that's my thoughts on it. Both would work fine, but it's the second revised background that I would choose.

07-15-2018, 08:53 AM
Thank you very much D Akey, this is confirmation of my thinking.

07-28-2018, 06:17 AM
a second illustration of what i writted. (the same story.)


D Akey
07-28-2018, 06:29 AM
I bet he's telling a wonderful story. Great start! Nice setting.

07-28-2018, 02:51 PM
i ll try to finish tomorow, i use to draw with "pastel gras" on artrage, but here i used "aquarelle and aérograph"

07-28-2018, 04:31 PM
Interesting illustration work, very scifi like. I would imagine if alternate universes exist, this would look like one of them.
Very nice! : )

07-29-2018, 05:31 AM
Really enjoy your work, a pleasure to view

07-29-2018, 06:59 AM
Thank you to have reply to my topic, it is great ! (my english is poor)

07-29-2018, 10:30 PM
finished, i m surprise to succed to what i want it is, i did start 2 time before this, and i wasn't able to color it. And finaly i like my drawn
(number 1)

07-30-2018, 03:27 AM
here is the picture but visited by photoshop, a bit more contrast ans saturation. Could you tell me whitch one you prefere ? Thank you (number 2)

07-30-2018, 04:12 AM
or this ? (number 3)