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elainep
04-08-2015, 04:00 AM
Hi, This is a very typical scene in the Pacific Northwest, where we get a lot of rain! It was something that I wanted to do in real watercolor, but I did it in Artrage first. Then I got the crazy idea for the raindrops. I kind of like the idea of it, because while it looks like it could be a "real" watercolor, it would be almost impossible to get the raindrops in true, transparent watercolor. In art rage I did it on a separate layer.

It reminded me of a few years ago, I went with another artist to a beach community art weekend. A watercolor painter whose work I really like, was trying to get the effect of raindrops by spraying some sort of clear polymer on the back of the glass on his framed prints. I thought it was pretty clever, but the other artist I was with thought it was just terrible. She thought it was just terrible that he was selling prints, and then doing such a commercial kitchy/cutsy thing to his work?? A TRAVESTY!!!! I feel if you can't have fun with art, what is that point! There were a lot of tourists in town, and if he felt he could sell more by selling prints and doing something different, than all the more power to him!!!

Anyway, I decided to try and add raindrops on another layer to this so here is my question is, do you think they work? any suggestions for the piece in general?

Elaine

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lori99320
04-08-2015, 03:24 PM
I really like it, raindrops and all. I grew up in the PNW, and visit a lot. This looks just like it would driving down I-5 or I-90 over the pass. Really beautiful!

BushcraftOnFire
04-09-2015, 07:31 AM
I think the raindrops work wonderfully Elaine! I am assuming that you are looking out of the car window down the road..

IF that is the case.. one thing that might help clarify the picture would be a bit of perspective.. which might be obtained by letting us see part of the car (The hood.. or a wiper blade.. or the inside of the roof.. or dash.. etc) Just my opinion. But it's terrific just as it is

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Delofasht
04-09-2015, 08:21 AM
My thoughts are over on WetCanvas forums as I saw you posted this there too. Once again good job, it reads well to me as raindrops on a windshield, great effect. :)

- Delo

elainep
04-09-2015, 04:50 PM
Thank you all. lori99320 hit it right on the head, it is I-5. I was thinking it was I-84 out in the Gorge, but it was a friend on mine who took the photo and she insists it is I-5. I have her permission to use it for painting purposes.

Elaine

Caesar
04-15-2015, 08:43 PM
You painted this rainy view masterfully and You raindrops are perfectly emulated and don't look "mechanic" nor "virtual additions" at all.
Welcome and congrats!

dee-teyl
04-17-2015, 03:36 AM
I like them.

pat1940
07-13-2015, 08:35 AM
I absolutely Love this painting, it is beautiful