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Christinetromop
10-21-2014, 08:54 AM
I started sketching this, and I would very much to continue on it somehow, but it's the how I am not quite sure of. Any feedback or tips or advice would be great. And if anything looks so proportionally wrong that makes your art heart scream for help, let me know.
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damasocl
10-21-2014, 04:11 PM
Estimado amigo(a) Cristinetromop:
Tu manejo del cabello es extraordinario, y muy bien logrado.
No sé si este boceto lo harás solamente con Lápiz, pero tal como está ahora, va muy bien.
Creo que el perfil de la dama podría mejorarse, aunque eso es una decisión personal que lo decides tú.
Cabello: es algo que a mí me cuesta mucho lograr, y sé que no es fácil.
Creo que falta un poquito de volumen, de "cuerpo" nada más.
Saludos...

I hope this translation of the web is understandable:
Dear friend Cristinetromop:
Your hair treatment is extraordinary, and very well done.
I do not know if this sketch you will do only with pencil, but as it stands now, is going well.
I think the profile of the lady could be improved [could be enhanced], but that's a personal decision that for you to decide.
Hair: something that is very difficult for me to accomplish, and I know it's not easy.
I think a bit of volume lack of "body" (for the hair) ... and that´s okey.
Greetings ...

Christinetromop
11-05-2014, 07:33 AM
Thank you, damasocl, for great feedback and advice.
I made a few changes, I think it works better that way. I'm just not sure what to do with it. I don't know if I'm going to keep it like this, or add some color of any sort.

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Christinetromop
11-08-2014, 10:06 AM
I added some color to it, but I really don't know. I don't know if I can keep the sketch on the final piece. Any tips and tricks of what tools to use and how to proceed in this?
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