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09-27-2014, 08:23 AM
Hi to all artists..

this is an other version of my bouquet of flowers..when someone look an other time to one work he can do more good things
the background make with the ruller tool
hope you like it:)

D Akey
09-27-2014, 08:29 AM
Very cool. You're painting some very fine paintings. Very pleasurable, and in some cases thought provoking.

A famous author whose book I was reading on how he writes, he said he writes to his special audience -- in his case it's his wife, where he can write something and imagine her reaction -- whether laughing at a joke or being touched in some way by a particular passage. It helps him focus.

I think it could work for painters the same way, when you're doing something for yourself, and not trying to fulfill someone else's idea. We have the freedom to speak to that special audience in that case. It's good to take a painting of flowers out of being merely a painting of something pretty into something grand.

Nice stuff.

09-27-2014, 02:26 PM
It's wonderful how strokes with the roller can produce a truly believable vase of flowers. I like it very much.:cool:

09-27-2014, 06:31 PM
Hello Samiro....Nothing wrong with a second look and if you believe it can be improved....Go For It!
I like it...strong brush strokes and really starting to like the roller effect as well...Nicely done!
Take care,

09-28-2014, 01:01 AM
I love it. Very imaginative. I'd print and hang it.

09-28-2014, 03:48 AM
Ditto Byron, love it.

09-28-2014, 05:30 AM
thanks for all nice comment dear artrager:p i appreciate them all
on this vase i find that also the "adjust colors layer" is very useful" sometimes you find a look with this adjusment you didnt expect it.
just now i knew maybe 10 pourcent about artrage function . hope i learn more.:)

09-28-2014, 01:38 PM
I love it. Very thought provoking.

09-29-2014, 12:55 AM
I love it. Very thought provoking.

thanks vandra;
here below the vase twin..:)

09-29-2014, 09:29 PM
Love this style for floreal still lives!

09-30-2014, 01:17 AM
thanks caesar :)

D Akey
09-30-2014, 03:40 AM
With the technique you're using for the flowers themselves, you're jumping right in with the flat intensity, which is fine if that's what you want. But if you wanted to try mixing your colors and doing exactly what you're doing, only doing it while perhaps starting out with a slightly darker color and then hitting it in a following step with a lighter, though still saturated value, it would build up the form more. Right now you show dimension in the vase, but the flowers are flat. So creating a bit more dimension in the flowers might serve you. It's almost like two different paintings now. Might want to try that for yourself on a separate version, if it makes you curious.

09-30-2014, 04:03 AM
thanks D.Akey for your constructive advice..yes the flowers are less volume than the vase. I make compromise between saturated color and the possibility to print what i do. its a little bit difficult. here some printing from my work with a smal printer just for have fun. i relize that when i correct the color with PS and less saturate it the print looks the same after as the photo corrected with photoshop. here some print with a smal printer. just to have fun :)

09-30-2014, 04:04 AM
Thanks again for all comments

D Akey
09-30-2014, 04:05 AM
Wow! Looks great at those sizes. Fantastic!

09-30-2014, 04:11 AM
thanks a lot. a photo them with the computer cam . not realy show them good