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pat1940
03-29-2014, 09:27 AM
Not too happy with my onion so if anyone has advice please feel free, done in oil

stevemawmv
03-29-2014, 09:39 AM
Hi Pat... Really like your 'paintings in three's', no pressure now...for the last one!
I' am going to try one of these one day. The onion looks fine, what are we cooking?
Take care friend,
Steve

silvy
03-29-2014, 09:45 AM
I like this still life, lovely colors.
What's wrong in the onion?
Perhaps it is too pretty ..... onions are usually less bright;)

copespeak
03-29-2014, 09:49 AM
I think your onion is beautiful, but the frayed bits on the left hand side aren't saying much .... confusing. Perhaps a little more shadow underneath!

Lovely copper pot!

Marilyn Anne
03-30-2014, 02:17 AM
You have grown so much. Think I agree with the frayed parts. I put my finger over them to block it out and the rest of the onion looked fine.

Ostogar
03-30-2014, 03:14 AM
I love it. I think it is well done.
Working the contrast of a white tablecloth on dark background is risky and is not an easy task...

eighty+
03-30-2014, 04:08 AM
Pat Baby there ain't no holding YOU just love your Copper Pot tell SilvyMy Onions allways look that colour when the outter layer is off KIA ORA ;) :D :D :D :D :D :D

Caesar
03-30-2014, 06:29 AM
I agree with Robyn. That's the only problem I see with the onions. Probably You were tearing while painting them ... LOL:o This still life is another winner along with the stunning first one.

pat1940
03-30-2014, 08:43 AM
Steve, thanks so much for your comments, haven't decided what to cook yet lol
Silvy, thanks for your input, really appreciate it
Robyn, thanks so much, will take the frayed pieces off, really appreciate you comments
Marilyn, also thanks for input, always appreciate all your comments
Ostogard, appreciate your kind comments, thanks so much
Dear eighty, thanks for taking time to peek in and see your kind comments
Caesar, I am going to fix my onion lol thanks for your input and kind comments.....number 3 coming up

AndreaMG
03-30-2014, 08:43 AM
Don't know about the onion but the copper pot is gorgeous. Time to eat :cool:

justjean
03-30-2014, 01:49 PM
Love that copper pot and your onion colour is fine, I have had some like that :)

pat1940
03-31-2014, 01:56 AM
Hope this looks better

coops
03-31-2014, 11:33 PM
Super super super painting Pat:)

pat1940
04-01-2014, 01:56 AM
Thankyou, Andrea, Jean and Katie, for all your kind comments, appreciate it

gxhpainter2
04-01-2014, 05:27 AM
Pat, you did good with the fix to the onion! the rest of the painted is so good, it is wonderful to see your growth as a painter!.. beautiful work!..

pai
04-01-2014, 08:21 AM
Woot, Pat, you're in a roll with another awesome still life painting. Really enjoy your recent paintings. Each one you have use different color palette that makes all still life comes alive. Beautiful :)

pat1940
04-01-2014, 04:46 PM
Hi Gary and Pia, I really appreciate your kind words and so very glad you like it