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lori99320
10-23-2013, 05:07 PM
Hi, I'm trying to create a postcard to email to friends and family. I could really use some constructive criticism, something just doesn't seem right, maybe the perspective or dimensions? Thanks!

lori99320
10-25-2013, 09:59 AM
No one???? I'd sure love to hear some ideas...thoughts...suggestions.... please....

thanks!

copespeak
10-25-2013, 10:59 AM
Your sunflowers are just gorgeous. I would maybe shadow the items some more to give them more weight. The vase has none.

The writing placement, with the Thanksgiving over the flowers ...... maybe get it off them, and pull the Giving away from the edge a bit? Smaller writing and set to the right rather than the left? Or, make it bigger (and lighter?) and go over the top of the items more?

Just suggestions to give you food for thought. You have done a lovely job and should be well pleased. :cool:

lori99320
10-25-2013, 03:51 PM
Thank you Robyn...all your comments were really appreciated. I've redone the lettering, added the shadowing and reworked the leaves. Now I'm happy! Thanks again

copespeak
10-25-2013, 04:27 PM
Wonderful! :) :) :)

justjean
10-25-2013, 06:13 PM
A lovely card :)

lori99320
10-26-2013, 11:23 AM
Thanks again for the comments!