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Den_er_da_hvid
06-24-2013, 08:42 AM
Hi

This is my fourth painting in Artrage, and it was time to try out oil painting.

I am working on "A look into the future". The big green area is for trees, and as you can see, I tried to get some more details in, just in the middle of the picture. Any thoughts on how I can make it more "tree"-like?

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Den_er_da_hvid
06-26-2013, 06:59 AM
I have made some improvements, but I am still not satisfied...

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copespeak
06-26-2013, 11:29 AM
I like your trees, they sort of writhe .... The city in the distance is great. The shapes in the foreground are a bit confusing. I am assuming the viewer is looking from a cliff/ rock face? Maybe work out what you are trying to portray there and refine.

Keep going! :)