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eeeprom
06-15-2013, 03:59 AM
would like to get some feedback on this painting I completed this morning.

Should I be concerned that know one has made any comments or is this picture just really awesome?

Sunmari
07-23-2013, 08:36 AM
I should say that I am not expert at all. But if you like to know a critical opinion of somebody else I would say that: colors are nice; sky is to heavy for this landscape (as patterned unlike water and land); the center of mass is shifted to the right side of the painting; I miss more objects in the landscape at the left side; the water spring is not realistic, may be it needs more shades around; green shades in water are confusing, is this algae or reflection of grass?
In general, I really like it. It is sunny and soft. I would change sky and add a fairy animal or object in the water. It would be a very nice illustration for a children book.