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petrnita
04-01-2013, 08:44 AM
Its my new still life composition in progress. Please some critique and sugestion. Thanks for watch :o

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copespeak
04-01-2013, 09:36 AM
This is terrific! Look forward to see the finished product. :D :D

limey-g
04-01-2013, 09:58 AM
Well your fruit looks so real, if I could make one small comment in that the profile of the rim of the glass looks to be slightly in the wrong plane in relationship to the bowl rim given the same viewpoint .
Look forward to seeing the finished work
Geoff

petrnita
04-01-2013, 10:17 AM
This is terrific! Look forward to see the finished product. :D :D

Thank You. I hope finish it tomorrow.

petrnita
04-01-2013, 10:22 AM
Well your fruit looks so real, if I could make one small comment in that the profile of the rim of the glass looks to be slightly in the wrong plane in relationship to the bowl rim given the same viewpoint .
Look forward to seeing the finished work
Geoff

Thanks for comment. Of course it is bad profile glass, good notice.

petrnita
04-01-2013, 10:23 AM
This is step by step my work.

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Tana123
04-01-2013, 12:58 PM
i find your fruits are really nice but I prefer the first version of the bottle - may be it's only a question of colour, I am not good enough to give you a more accurate advice. Anyway I like this painting of yours.

petrnita
04-02-2013, 06:55 AM
The next step in my project. I changed the look of the bottle, glass perspective, background and ambient color. I ask for your comments and any suggestions.

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limey-g
04-02-2013, 07:20 AM
That looks good now and the glass and bottle do not look like they are falling over.
One area that does puzzle me is the light area around the apple outside the dish.
Geoff

petrnita
04-02-2013, 11:07 AM
And... next step.

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