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Ulla
03-10-2013, 03:15 AM
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I discovered artrage a week ago, and I am trying to find my ways with it. This is the second version of my first painting - the first version was just too bad.
By the way, I am Ulla from Berlin, Germany, and I am very glad to have found this forum here! I hope my English is not too bad.
Looking forward to your comments & critique!

grayflo
03-10-2013, 03:23 AM
That is lovely, Ulla. Welcome to the forum. I like your picture very much.

Ulla
03-10-2013, 03:30 AM
Thank you so much, Grayflo!

Tonyjazz
03-10-2013, 05:44 AM
Welcommen, und goodentag. Glad to have you here. Your Englsih is fine. You will be amazed what you can do with Artrage as you learn.

D Akey
03-10-2013, 06:40 AM
Welcome!

I love it. Overall it's quite beautiful.

I think by way of criticism I would perhaps not use the same muted green color on the mountaintops and the low mountains and foreground trees, especially when there's snow int he mountain range. It could look this way in the photo, but it's a way for the artist to enhance the feeling of depth to give them a separate character that identifies the groups in unique ways to promote separation and thus depth of your landscape. The variance doesn't have to be vast. But the rule of thumb is that as mountains recede, they have more atmosphere around them and so it takes more of a sky color (and lighter value) as you get more and more atmosphere between the viewer and the thing you're looking at.

But the palette you've chosen is very pleasing and idyllic. Well done!

Marilyn Anne
03-10-2013, 07:46 AM
Your Painting has lovely colors and a nice sense of depth.

copespeak
03-10-2013, 09:04 AM
Welcome Ulla, and it's an excellent painting to begin with. I don't mind bad English at all; it reminds me we are talking to a world wide community, which is very exciting! :cool:

fmc
03-10-2013, 09:17 AM
Welcome My son was born in Berlin. We lived in Spandau for 2 years. A great city.

Ulla
03-10-2013, 11:23 PM
Thanks so much everyone for taking the time to look and comment! Your comments are a big movitation for me to keep on practising and learning! Have a wonderful Sunday!

justjean
03-17-2013, 01:55 AM
Ulla, great to see you here along with your lovely painting

limey-g
03-17-2013, 02:25 AM
A lovely painting, welcome to the forum you will find the folks here so helpful and some of the nicest people you would like to meet.
Geoff

kenmo
03-17-2013, 04:42 AM
Cool scene and painting....:D

silvy
03-17-2013, 07:08 AM
Very lovely start and welcome to the forum:D

Ulla
03-17-2013, 11:56 PM
Jean, Geoff, Kenmo and Silvia: Thanks so much for taking the time to look and for your encouraging comments! I've only been around here for a few days, but I love the friendly and supportive atmosphere. Here's to you all!

coops
03-18-2013, 12:39 AM
Welcome and wow thats so lovely:)