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Evil Robot
11-02-2012, 12:37 PM
Finished this in Artrage with the water color and pencil tools. Wanted to work in a really loose fun style.

D Akey
11-02-2012, 01:41 PM
Fun details and the drawing stuff is good. Lots of personality. You may want to consider staging your compositions where the viewer doesn't have to work to get around your pics, tripping over the debris as it were.

You may want to simplify what is behind your main actors and confine your detail to different groupings. Right now it's pretty evenly handled and thus the unimportant stuff it seeming to upstage your stars (Bearer, Well, Knife-in-hand). But I dare say the details unto themselves are smashing!

GremlinMo
11-02-2012, 06:55 PM
i wish i could warn the guy not to walk that way ,don't look safe haha.. has a good story to it :)

Evil Robot
11-02-2012, 07:03 PM
Thank you for the comments and also the advice. I see what you mean about the extra little details. I was hoping that the cooler colors in the background would push it out of the way but I see what you mean. It is confusing to the eye. Thanks again.

Caesar
11-02-2012, 09:14 PM
I like it very much and agree with D Akey suggestion (he's the a unique resource to this Forum with his experience, intelligence and professional knowledge ... and a most pleasant and friendly mate)

pat1940
11-03-2012, 02:27 AM
I also agree with DAkey on this one Evil and please do not take offence as I love your art, Mr AKey has given me great advise also, I did get a little lost in this one, but no big deal, so waiting for the next one

kenmo
11-03-2012, 07:30 AM
Loose and fun this image is... Nice work...

Evil Robot
11-03-2012, 08:43 AM
Thanks guys;) And no offence taken what so ever. Keep the crits coming. Can't get better if I don't know what I'm doing wrong;)

coops
11-04-2012, 01:17 AM
Another great one Evil Robot, well done:)

limey-g
11-04-2012, 02:36 AM
I like it and the fun of this type of drawing is taking the time to take it all in.
Geoff