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Mike Severoff
09-14-2012, 11:10 AM
Sleeping in a pink

Marilyn Anne
09-14-2012, 11:38 AM
Well painted and well drawn .

D Akey
09-14-2012, 01:25 PM
Sleeping in a pink might be better translated 'in the pink' meaning very fit and healthy, or 'in a pink (insert noun like blouse)', or if you were being poetic, you could say something like 'pink repose'. But enough about English. My Slavic languages are only if using the computer to translate. Hahah. Your English is great.

. . . as is this painting. Very casual and intimate all at the same time. It really delivers an inspiring response from me and I'm sure from many others. Nice compositional elements with the lighting.

The painting makes me want to go see what she looks like. Good sense of mystery and it pulls me in like a good book.

Well done indeed! :):):cool::cool::):)

Vasilenko
09-14-2012, 01:34 PM
Very well done!

limey-g
09-14-2012, 02:15 PM
Nicely done Mike, very well drawn, really good form.
Geoff

coops
09-14-2012, 11:27 PM
Good to see you painting again Mike and this is great, very well done:)

Mike Severoff
09-15-2012, 11:21 AM
Sleeping in a pink might be better translated 'in the pink' meaning very fit and healthy, or 'in a pink (insert noun like blouse)', or if you were being poetic, you could say something like 'pink repose'.
I can not argue with a native speaker :)
I removed the "a." -I think that's better. "in" - not entirely successful. more successful - "around". twice,sorry :)

Thank you, D Akey

Mike Severoff
09-15-2012, 11:23 AM
really good form.

thanks, I'll tell her :)

gxhpainter2
09-17-2012, 03:43 AM
Mike ...really nicely painted I like the color and irregular edges give it a intimate closeness and the light hitting her body is well done... excellent painting!.

PGraf
09-17-2012, 10:07 AM
Great!
i think the white you choose is a bit to powerful for the clothes.
Maybe you can turn it off a bit.

-Pit-




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Caesar
09-17-2012, 08:12 PM
Great lights here!

pat1940
09-18-2012, 05:52 AM
So well done Mike, like it very much

JOSEPHINE.EARP
09-18-2012, 09:20 AM
Great painting Mike well done Best wishes Jo

silvy
09-20-2012, 04:32 AM
I really like the way you used light:)
Great work!