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Dori
01-13-2007, 01:47 AM
Hello All,

This is my first serious work in AR. I'm trying to capture a night scene in a fairy-tale style forest, or something like that. this is what I got so far, but I'm having a rough time trying to get it to be darker while keeping the moonlit (is that the correct term?) spots. please ignore the grammar and spelling mistakes, English is not my native language.

thanks for you time and critique

Dori

Lee
01-13-2007, 05:32 AM
awsome !!! before i read your comments , i looked at your painting, first thing i thought was "Disney",

Mouse
01-13-2007, 07:45 AM
I looked at the painting and thought "scary". Don't want to be in those woods after dark.

Selby
01-13-2007, 10:43 AM
well im convinced its a spooky woods



Selby

ps your english is perfect

maror
01-14-2007, 02:55 AM
welcome

a very well done first work i think... your shapes are great!
Good luck!

Greez

Raphael
01-14-2007, 08:19 AM
hey, thats a nice one!

Dori
09-05-2007, 08:13 PM
Hello All!

after a rather hectic few months, I re-discovered artrage and took some time to work on a new project - I'm thinking of a children's book - so here is something from this project, and I would like to get some critique from you guys on how to improve my work. still getting used to ver.2.5...

thanks !

screenpainter
09-05-2007, 09:07 PM
Those first trees are just fantastic!
Like the second one too, but blown away by the first one.

D Akey
09-06-2007, 06:22 AM
Dori! Say hi to Ori and Nori for me. . . and Owen and Glowen, and Fili and Kili, Bifur, Bofur, Bombur and of course Thorin Oakenshield himself. (Dwarves from The Hobbit)

I think those first trees are wonderfully done.

The second is cool too. I like the homes in the trees. Bet it caused quite a stir among the Elves though when the Dwarves moved in.

:D :D :D

Dori
09-06-2007, 07:52 AM
thanks guys, hope I get to finish this by next week...work takes most of my time these days.

screenpainter
09-18-2007, 07:32 PM
Hope you get to finish the dwarves picture it is going to be fantastic too. It is
an amazing start.