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AlanEu
05-01-2011, 01:28 AM
Dear all
My recent piece paited with oil brush and knife.
Hope you like it .
C&C welcome
Alan

jonwood
05-01-2011, 06:25 AM
nice........

jibes
05-01-2011, 07:28 AM
I think your painting is very well done. My Crit would be the water. To me it looks like the boat is on grass. The water should reflect the boat and the buildings and then it would be much better!

screenpainter
05-01-2011, 08:12 AM
pretty. love the colors in this.

Alexandra
05-01-2011, 09:01 AM
Wonderful piece, I agree with Jibes, other than that-excellent!

justjean
05-01-2011, 11:30 AM
Lovely, and great use of oil and knife :)

gxhpainter2
05-01-2011, 11:45 AM
AlanEu - very nice warm and cool colors mixed, the loose brushwork and color transitions work well... I would have to agree with jibes observation that the boat looks like it is on grass.. the water may be greenish but that shade of green is more grass like than dark green water... but all in all a very nice painting:):):):):):)

Caesar
05-02-2011, 01:35 AM
A fine and stylish interpretation of the place!

coops
05-02-2011, 02:24 AM
Great work Alan, well done:)

mannafig
05-02-2011, 02:42 AM
Very nice:):)

Noogins
05-03-2011, 04:59 AM
This is so pretty. I love the colors and brushstrokes. Very nice!

AlanEu
05-04-2011, 04:25 PM
Thank all the friends for their nice comments and suggestions. Specially want thank jibes,Alexandra,gxhpainter for the Crits. The boat looks like it is on grass. Is it possible the water in the canal is two shallow , then the boat really rests on the underwater grass?:D we have to check with Caesar sicne he comes from Italy .
Seriously , I felt something weired when i am done this piece but just do not know how to fix it ..
Thanks again guys

Caesar
05-04-2011, 08:48 PM
... maybe the water is even too blue for Venice channels, considering that it's not really like Capri or Sardinia ...:D

MacPix
05-04-2011, 11:41 PM
Really nice!