View Full Version : Hell-Like Crying in the Dark Forever

P. D. Dinkles
04-26-2011, 08:12 PM
A Navigator's Dream - At the Gates of Hell

The navigator informed the crew we were lost. The navigator turned and spoke, "Captain, do you believe in Hell?"

I don't believe in anything. You are the navigator, navigate fool" replied the Captain as he moved forward.

"Where do you think this gate goes Captain?"

"To hell I guess. Damn it Jim. How did we get here?" Fool, you led us to the gates of hell.

"Look, it's the Gate of Hell." "Captain were not going to hell are we?"

"Looks like it. Free will, damn ye to hell. (hell pun)

With the greatest fear, the navigator cried "What's it like in there?"

"I am told it is like crying in the dark forever."

As suddenly as the dream had begun it ended. Aboard the ship, the navigator, sextant in hand, sought the North star. A memory in his head faded as the sun rose.

04-26-2011, 09:21 PM
Powerful PD.:):):):):)

04-26-2011, 09:45 PM
Hmm, scary!:eek:

04-27-2011, 12:07 AM
Very interesting Ron.... a really bad dream for sure. :eek:

04-27-2011, 03:31 AM
PD - you are definitly bringing a strange zymurgy of poetry and art together... I like the direction you are moving here. you have a good eye for color and texture and symbolism, you should follow this inclination totally... great image and narrative...;);):):):):)

04-27-2011, 03:34 AM
Don't want to fall into that. Powerful image.

04-27-2011, 04:26 AM
Interesting painting :)

04-27-2011, 04:34 AM
PD, quite a story teller you are, glad I am not in your dreams:D:D:D:D:D

04-27-2011, 09:35 AM
Beautiful PD. It looks like crying in the dark:eek:. Fantastic.

04-27-2011, 11:56 AM
Hell must be a scary place...WOW !!!

04-27-2011, 03:22 PM
That's pretty darn spooky. Effective. Good work. :)