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barnburner
01-06-2011, 02:07 AM
In my story "Moving West", I was never happy with the painting for Chapter 7, "Snakebite".
I made some alterations, and still wasn't satisfied.
So - now I've scrapped it, and made a new painting.
This one, I like. Hope ya'll do too. :D:)
For comparison, the first painting is the new one.
The second painting is the old one.

Caesar
01-06-2011, 03:23 AM
The improvement is quite dramatic and Mariska is clearly protagonist of this episode in the new version. The old one had both the lady and the snake only as small and not perceivable enough parts of the picture.

barnburner
01-06-2011, 03:40 AM
The improvement is quite dramatic and Mariska is clearly protagonist of this episode in the new version. The old one had both the lady and the snake only as small and not perceivable enough parts of the picture.

I agree. The original one was a reflection of my lack of confidence in painting people. Because doing this story has forced me to battle thru that weakness, I've improved enough that I've gained sufficient confidence to change it the way I would have preferred in the beginning.
Thank you Caesar. Much appreciated. :)

eighty+
01-06-2011, 03:47 AM
Sorry. I like. The 1st one. :D:D:D :D:D:D:D----E/S

barnburner
01-06-2011, 04:09 AM
Sorry. I like. The 1st one. :D:D:D :D:D:D:D----E/S

LOL....:D:D I'll take that under advisement...
Thanks Eighty! :):)