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semd74
11-23-2010, 09:16 AM
This painting looks like card board to me...I am not satisfied with it at all...C&C welcome as always

Peter Pinckney
11-23-2010, 11:26 AM
Hi Sem...........first let me apologise for taking the liberty of changing your painting...........I find it hard to critique but easier to show what I want to say..........I used the soft knife to smooth and left some as you had it.........I think a cup should be smooth........but I'm no expert........please don't be offended.........;)I did it too quickly really :mad:but with more time it could be much better.

semd74
11-23-2010, 11:35 AM
You definitely improved my painting...thanks for the advice Peter...:)

Alexandra
11-23-2010, 04:26 PM
Great perspective Steve. This is something that is so hard for me.

barnburner
11-23-2010, 04:28 PM
Steve, I think it looks very good. Certainly far better than I could do.:)

justjean
11-23-2010, 04:42 PM
Sem, great shape and colours to your cup and saucer but smoother is better :)

Jasminek
11-24-2010, 01:55 AM
The shape of cup is realistic, just the coffee looks not so "liquid" but I can't tell you how to do it.:)

Caesar
11-24-2010, 02:23 AM
I love this painting :cool::):):):):) ... also because that's what we call a cup of coffee and most foreign people an expresso and reserve the name in Your title to a mug of coffee tinted hot water!:D

semd74
11-24-2010, 03:54 AM
Thanks to all who commented and gave advice...I really enjoy being part of this helpful artistic community where we can truly learn from each other...:)