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javier
10-26-2010, 02:59 AM
Hello friends.
After a period of hard work have rewarded me with a day off and I wanted to take the opportunity here to draw these two girls who are daughters of some great friends. Personally I think you need more treatment on the skin, what do you think?
Hope you like it.

barnburner
10-26-2010, 04:47 AM
Wonderful drawing Javier... I think it's great the way it is. :)

pat1940
10-26-2010, 05:09 AM
Beautiful drawing Javier, and loving looking children;);):):)

kenmo
10-26-2010, 08:26 AM
Very cute.....

Jasminek
10-26-2010, 10:02 AM
They are so cute!:)

AT-TA
10-26-2010, 01:45 PM
Very pretty children made a pretty picture.

I would put more shading in the eyes... and that's it. Very good work, Javier.

MJSparks
10-26-2010, 01:54 PM
I wouldn't do much more than what AT-TA suggested. Only to bring out those adorable eyes. Excellent work.

Caesar
10-26-2010, 08:11 PM
This drawing is just fantastically on target.
It's time to balance it tonally, I'd say.
Now You should only darken some points on lip sides, on and about the eies and the around the nose and nostrils, I think .... some outline should be darker too, depending on light direction and what is behind. Dark against light behind and light against dark behind is the adjustment, golden rule, whenever possible and credible.

Mairzie Dotes
10-26-2010, 08:18 PM
javier,
A delightful portrait of two sweethearts. Well painted! :)

mannafig
10-27-2010, 12:02 AM
They both look delightful:):)
I would personally just add a little more shadow to bring out the eyes and a few other bits as have already been suggested

coops
10-27-2010, 06:43 AM
This is something to cherish Javier. They are adorable and you have captured their little faces with such a delicate touch:)

screenpainter
10-29-2010, 09:55 PM
looks good to me. I like the softness of it. I think the eyes should have some tint of gray to the irises. The hair is amazing.

javier
10-31-2010, 09:20 PM
Thank you very much everyone, actually you are all right, but when I apply some shadows but I feel like if I lose and I'm not entirely convinced with the outcome.
Indeed I must learn to better skin care, sincerely thanks for their constructive comments