PDA

View Full Version : would like to hear feedback



pat1940
06-28-2010, 04:50 AM
I am trying to paint some flowers, this is a rose on my bush, please feel free to comment

Docsmith626
06-28-2010, 08:25 AM
Pat, this is excellent. I love the way the texture of the canvas accents the softness of the petals. If you want more feedback, try posting it in the gallery forum. Critique is the least visited of all the forums. ;)

pat1940
06-28-2010, 08:59 AM
Thanks again Docsmith, and thankyou for suggesting the gallery, happy painting to you

eighty+
07-03-2010, 07:34 AM
Sorry Pat I don't no the song?? :D:D:D

carlcath
07-06-2010, 04:01 PM
Very nice. I think the lighter colored outline around the petals makes the petals appear really thick, kind of like one of those hard waxy flowers I can not think of the name of. Seldom are petals this thick. I think if you made the border much thinner, it would give it a more delicate look which is what you usually see in a flower.

I really like the color and the depth.

I agree that the critique forum is one of the least visited sites, however in the gallery forum one usually does not get constructive ideas on how to change a piece for different effects.