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06-11-2010, 05:47 PM
I love ultimate frisbee. It's my favorite sport of all time. I've had my first day off in weeks, and I got to join a pick up game today, I had time to draw a page for my brother, I played a load of video games, and had time for a 40 minute sketch before I go to bed. I'm tired. I'm going to sleep really well after all that frisbee. =D

My brother gets to go to a tournament on Saturday, but I have a final project to turn in this weekend and I'm working two jobs, both of which have me working shifts on Saturday, so I can't go. =(

Anyways, this amusingly enough started as a self portrait based off of the original ultimate logo, but then I started perfecting "my" form and the end result looks more like something you'd see either of my brothers doing on the field, and not so much me. I grew up playing on a gravel field, so you really didn't want to do much diving, and it's been very well burned into my psyche: don't fall down while playing ultimate. It happens all the time, but I can't make myself do it.

I'm not sure how to draw bodies in extreme motion. I dug out some references, but this move is pretty unique to frisbee, and I'm pretty sure I got the chest area wrong, so any references/critiques would be greatly appreciated. Actually, any in general. The only way I'll get better is if people point out the flaws I can't see. So blaze away!

06-11-2010, 06:46 PM
Hello gray, good to see you again.:)

Hm, i am not the one to give critiques.. but i will tell you what i think even if you get mad at me...oh... i think... generally it is quite well drawn... but the whole figure lucks the life in it... otherwise i like it...nice expression and body action is always hard to express without ref pic. Caesar is very good at drawing... he will tell you wholeheartilly what he thinks...

06-12-2010, 03:24 AM
It does lack life. Which is another reason I was asking for critiques. I'm also super hard to get mad. I'm pretty mechanical, not very in touch with emotion. Perhaps why it lacks life. I dunno. Anyways, thanks for commenting!

06-12-2010, 08:42 AM
You know Gray, I think if you used some shading here and there it would add definition. I am weak with anatomy and don't have the right to offer crit, but I like the drawing alot. A fun sport indeed!:)