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05-12-2010, 09:32 AM
getting the feel of pen still painting like oil pastel but begining to come to terms with knife and air brush comments welcome

05-13-2010, 08:11 AM
Nice use of colour:):)

05-13-2010, 03:25 PM
You have really nice detail in the eyes, the eye lashes, and the face as a whole. The mouth as seen from this angle is seldom see without some teeth showing. With all the other detail, I think the mouth needs to carry thru with that same detail.

Also, there seems to be something about the transition between the forehead and the hair. I think maybe some shadowing to soften it?

I agree with mannafig, nice choice of colors.

05-14-2010, 01:16 AM
thanks mannafig could you be more critical please ?? thanks carlcath I agree on both points but havn't mastered the tools yet will keep trying (:-))