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FavuQuad
05-10-2010, 07:25 PM
This is my second painting in over 8 years!
My painting of my little sister!
Please give me your opinions and ratings!

eighty+
05-10-2010, 11:45 PM
good I like it face shadows I can't get to grips with my self ? I like yours the only comment I can make is the bracelet, make's the hand above it look like its been grafted on just my opinion ok

FavuQuad
05-11-2010, 02:58 PM
How do you suppose I fix it?

carlcath
05-13-2010, 04:40 PM
I'd be curious to know what your sister feels about this painting? (that is a rhetorical question said as a joke)

As to the bracelet, it needs to extend beyond the edge of the arm. Put a bracelet on your arm and look at it. You will see it is probably at a angle to your arm and also, there is a lump on two sides of your arm.

If it is a really tight bracelet that is sort of cutting into your arm, then the skin will slope in toward the bracelet on both sides as well as in the front where you would have to have some shadowing to show the curve where the skin is pulled tight.

eighty+
05-14-2010, 02:30 AM
yes thanks calcath thats the complet answer otherwise it looks good

Mike Severoff
05-16-2010, 08:56 AM
Not clearly in general anything.
It that? /What is it? About what?/
You trained?
- Then - yes, it cool!
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