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02-02-2010, 08:55 PM
suggestions for improvement?

02-02-2010, 09:34 PM
looks great to me. sorry I can't bring any criticism or suggest improvements.
to me it's successful piece.
I like those bright acrylic colors and the free flowing brush strokes.

02-02-2010, 10:20 PM
thanks so much. I looked at your gallery and like your use of color as well.

02-02-2010, 10:34 PM
Like the bold and jutting rock prominentories garnished with the stylised foliage below
The scene speaks for itself

Sometimes you just cannot improve on simplicity :D

02-03-2010, 01:34 AM
Looks finished to me and well done at that! Nice painting!

02-04-2010, 06:56 AM
Depends on what exactly you had been trying to achieve. :)

If you tell us, we might be able to give tips.

02-04-2010, 07:36 AM
It looks mighty fine to me, maybe some stark blue sky on a layer below the outcrop but other than that it's great. Can't imagine anyone not being able to see what you are trying to achieve straight away.

02-04-2010, 08:27 AM
I'm totally in agreement with everyone here and that what you have is just wonderful. I love everything so far and your style is so unique with the multiple color ranges and the color outlining. You've got a style all your own so embrace it and just keep on doing what your doing!